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From my Professor: What you’ve got here is good, but I’d like to see more discussion on the details of the Dual Process Model and of the particular strategies you’re recommending to deal with imposter syndrome. Imagine your audience is someone who suffers from imposter syndrome themselves, but have never heard about anything it. You aim is to (1) explain the underlying psychological concepts so that they can understand what imposter syndrome is and what causes it, and (2) what they can do to help fix the problem. I don’t think you’ve written enough to fully inform someone on how the Dual Process Model works (and so where Imposter Syndrome comes from), nor on what steps to take to combat the problem.

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